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Tuesday, January 25, 2011

Narrative Poem

A beautiful day, I think to myself
The sun and the heat will surely be out
I run to  the window that's under my shelf
And look for the sun that will defiantly be about

But there it is
The wind and the rain
And there goes my bliss
Oh, such pain

All I wanted was a day to play
Amongst the beautiful summer air
Now on my mattress I shall lay
While I contemplate this unfair

I guess I will go out anyway
Into the wind that's harsh and cold
I don't care what they'll say
I just am so bold

Saturday, January 15, 2011

Poem on an Incident

                                                    just a young tree
                                              living happily in the world
                                          in its few years budding, blooming
                                           turning red in the fall and going
                                            on its path of simple, simple life
                                                one day a stranger came
                                                walking down the street
                                                        he smiled
                                                                       and yanked on me
                                                           just a
                                                        poor tree
                                                       strong, now
                                                           with a
                                                           broken
                                                           branch
                                                         a broken
                                                         limb, the
                                                        pain of one
                                                      person's pull

Wednesday, January 12, 2011

Reflection on Starry Night

Starry Night by Anne Sexton is a very interesting poem. It takes a painting that many think of as pretty and turns it into something creepy. It turns into death and monstrous thoughts; a battle within ones self. 

This poem shows that things can be seen from different perspectives based on the person's personality. If they are generally unhappy they will see the dark colors and notice how they compliment the painting. A generally happier person will notice the stars and how they compliment the painting.

Like the painting, the poem has many layers and many feelings within. They can be interpreted in many different ways. It just depends on the person and their view of the world. They just need to look carefully and extract what they can connect to. Each poem/painting is multiple opinions.

Poem On "Heat"

A still air drowning me
A heat covering me
Rubbing close
Covering me in a captive's
bond
No way to move
No way to resist

It was best not to try
To let it do what it came  for
Then pass
To wait for the cool wind to save me.

Until then
I will
Brace the
Heat

Sunday, January 9, 2011

Analyzing Paintings- Heat by: Florine Stetteimer

The painting "Heat" uses colors to show the feeling. Though heat cannot be felt the colors used are colors that are thought of as "hot." Orange and red make me thing of fire- which is hot. The pale colors of the womens' dresses are colors that make me think of being tired and that's how many people feel at the heat of the day.

The positions of the women also show heat. They look relaxed and like they don't want to move anytime soon. The woman in the red armchair looks like she was knitting, but stopped because it got too hot.

Where the orange turns lighter is most-likely where it is most sunny. No one is in those spots. The women are on the edges.

All of the details in this painting show that this painting depicts an uncomfortable heat.


Heat- http://www.brooklynmuseum.org/opencollection/objects/1165/Heat

Sunday, December 12, 2010

Since it was passed on April 23, the Arizona Immigration Law has deported many immigrants. The Arizona Law was written to lower drug violence and the number of illegal immigrants in Arizona, but many have protested it.
"It's that whole attitude that fundamentally reflects, 'Yes, we're trying to take over immigration policy,' " Foster Maer, an attorney for a Hispanic civil-rights group. "It really demonizes Latinos generally and immigrants specifically." (Arizona immigration law has groups readying for court, USA Today)
The law gives permission for police to stop a person on the street if they look like an illegal immigrant and ask for documents proving that they are in the country legally; in fact citizens can sue the state if the law isn't being enforced to its fullest. The law also makes it a crime to not carry documents if you are not a citizen.

In Mexico, where many of Arizona's illegal immigrants are from, changes are being made as well. The government increased the maximum number of years in jail for a smuggler from 12 to 16. Shelters for children have been preparing for more people to come.
"All of us are getting ready for people to come back," Maria Isabel Avruiz, the director of one of the shelters, said.
I remember first reading the New York Times article by Randal C. Archibold. I was amazed at what I read. A law that would "undermine the basic notions of fairness that we cherish as Americans (Barak Obama)."  As I read other articles on the law I read about people who called it "improvements in the quality of life (Bob Dane)."

In this story I would like to show that racial discrimination, by law or not shouldn't be tolerated. People shouldn't feel under pressure because of their identity. I hope that you, the reader, will learn that racial identity is important  and should be embraced by others.

Works Cited Page
Archibold, Randal C. "Arizona Enacts Stringent Law on Immigration." The New York Times 23 April 2010: n.p. Web.

Gomez, Alan. "Arizona Fells Negative 'Ripple Effect' Over Border Law." USA Today 19 November 2010: A3. Web.

Hawley, Chris. "Mexico Braces For Effects of Arizona Immigration Law." USA Today 26 July 2010: n.p. Web.

Gamboa, Suzanne. "Arizona Deportation Stats: Thousands Deported Even Without New Law." The Huffington Post 28 July 2010: n.p. Web.

Gomez, Alan. "Arizona Immigration Law Has Groups Readying for Court." USA Today 20 July: n.p. Web.

Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Reading Response: The Singing by Alison Croggon

The main character in The Singing, Maerad, shines apart from main characters of other books. Maerad refuses to be weak and she has determination that runs through thick and thin. As she tries to help save the city of Innail while it fights the the evil ally of the Nameless One, the Landrost, she finds herself close to death. The fear of the encounter changed her attitude. Death so close left an immovable shadow over her.

Maerad has faced dangerous sorcerers and elemental gods, yet she expected those. Though she knew she was heading to a dangerous place (the Landrost's mind) she hadn't come to terms that she could die from it. In Maerad's defense, death is a hard thing to understand and an even harder thing to come to terms with. Even as she found the bodies of others she could never fully accept that they were gone forever.

Maered is just a young girl who has more pressure than she can handle. She is wanted by the powerful Winterking, an evil man without a soul, and many dark sorcerers;she carries the key to the safety or ending of Annar, the treesong, yet she is still undaunted until a nightmare almost becomes reality.

As the nightmare rode the hope was safe
Determined to keep the thing that mattered
As she fought for Annar the hope went away
Wrapped in a blanket of dark she fought sleep